Motif - Take off.

Posted by Haim Ziv on Tue Jan 11, 2005 2:26 pm

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First light. D2h 80~400 at 400mm 1/1000 f9.5 crop about 35% from original. All comments and suggestion will be welcome.
Thank you for looking.

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by Miguel Lasa on Tue Jan 11, 2005 2:38 pm

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Nice splash.I like the pose and the water reflection

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by Alan Murphy on Tue Jan 11, 2005 3:13 pm

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Haim, very nice. I'm thinging a horizontal, as the reflection is just not that strong. I'd also clone out the lone rock. Love the action.

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by Michael Dossett on Tue Jan 11, 2005 5:28 pm

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Haim, I really like the splash behind the bird. It reminds me a little of the wake behind the coot you posted a couple of days ago. I especially like the individual droplets at the top of the splash making it look like its curved back on itself a little. I think the camera was probably level but the angle of the bird slightly away from you combined with the angle of ripples on the water makes this feel like it needs a slight clockwise turn to me.

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by Chris Kayler on Tue Jan 11, 2005 7:13 pm

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Nice one Haim. I agree w/ Alan.

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by Cindy Marple on Tue Jan 11, 2005 9:35 pm

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Terrific pose of the bird and I like the big splash behind the bird. I also agree with Alan's crop suggestion.

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by Mike Wilson on Wed Jan 12, 2005 1:14 am

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Nice catch, a bit soft as presented and a horizontal may be stronger on impact.

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by richardkchapman on Wed Jan 12, 2005 8:54 am

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Another vote for a horizontal crop. The gull needs some space to fly into. I love the water splash though.

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by Haim Ziv on Wed Jan 12, 2005 9:02 am

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OK. Thank you very much. You convince me to made the change. I hope it's look better now.

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by Alan Murphy on Wed Jan 12, 2005 9:09 am

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Haim, the change is great, but no one will no what changes you made without seeing the original. When ever you do reposts you should leave the original up there and add the changed image to the thread. Thanks.

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