Say Ahhhhhh . . . (with repost)


Posted by Parrothead Pete on Wed Sep 28, 2005 1:41 pm

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Another osprey up close and personal. Flamingo, Everglades National Park.

EOS 20D w/sigma 50-500; tripod; 580ex with better beamer @ - 2/3

ISO 200
1/1000
incident -1
f/5.6

slight crop
"There are no other Everglades in the world. They are, they have always been, one of the unique regions of the earth; remote, never wholly known. Nothing anywhere else is like them..." - Marjory Stoneman Douglas


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by RAmoruso on Wed Sep 28, 2005 2:37 pm
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Mike, One of your best Osprey's yet. My only nit is it appears to be a bit flat. Pump up the contrast in curves (or use levels and set a white point and black point). If needed, you can do just a highlight correction in H/S to tone down the whites if they are too hot (or set them lower in levels). Getting the black point will make this POP :!: :wink:

Great pose and composition. :)

P.S. I downloaded and did the following just to see how it would work out: In Levels I set the black point for an area on the left wing that was the darkest point I found. In Curves, I created a slight "S" curve. In H/S I did a standard shadow recovery but in highlights I set the top slider to 78 and played around with the amount until I was please with the highlights. The Osprey really popped with these corrections.

Again, this is really a great Osprey image.

Per Mike's request, I uploaded the version I was working with yesterday. I think it needs a bit of lightening. This is a good example of how calibrated monitors vs. uncalibrated monitors affect the viewing. At home on my PS workstation's calibrated monitor, this version is brighter and looks to have the contrast I would like. At work on an uncalibrated monitor, it still looks a bit flat and when I checked it last night on another computer I have, it looked too bright.
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by mrhughj on Wed Sep 28, 2005 2:38 pm
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Stunning Osprey image full of detail, Mike!

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by Ofer Levy on Wed Sep 28, 2005 3:32 pm
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Very nice portrait! Excellent dof, and I love his funny expretion! :)
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by Alan Murphy on Wed Sep 28, 2005 4:07 pm
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Nice one Mike. I would like to see a bit less flash. A great expression.
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by Ligia on Wed Sep 28, 2005 4:08 pm
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Love this portrait! Absolutely gorgeous !!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :)
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by Mark Farag on Wed Sep 28, 2005 5:07 pm
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Beautiful shot, Mike! Excellent detail, pose, and exposure.

After bringing this image in PSE 2.0 and removing the color cast it suddenly "pops".

Nice work as usual!

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by Miguel Lasa on Wed Sep 28, 2005 5:44 pm
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excellent portrait , great facial expression :)
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by AForns on Wed Sep 28, 2005 5:46 pm
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Mike this is Awesome !!!! :) :) Do agree with Robert and should make a difference ..... :roll: you been processing too many DC images :shock: :mrgreen: 8) 8)
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by KK Hui on Wed Sep 28, 2005 7:03 pm
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A fine intimate portrait, Mike!
Love the expression and the stare ...
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by Fabs Forns on Wed Sep 28, 2005 9:16 pm
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Killer expression and those eyes.... :roll: :D
 

by Christina Evans on Wed Sep 28, 2005 9:46 pm
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I definitely think this is one of your best, Mike. Great expression and those breast feathers are gorgeous.
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by Parrothead Pete on Wed Sep 28, 2005 10:03 pm
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here's a repost with some of Robert's suggestions put to use...
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by Peterh on Thu Sep 29, 2005 1:32 am
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Excellent shot Mike.

Your repost is too much for my taste. It's somewhere in the middle

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by RAmoruso on Thu Sep 29, 2005 6:53 am
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Mike,

I agree with Peter, you need to get somewhere between your repost above and the one I posted today. Ospreys can be a challenge getting the exposure, much less the contrast just right since they range from dark (almost black) to light (almost white) feathers.

If you are finding the whites are too high try Greg's recommendations in his article at http://www.naturescapes.net/092003/gd0903.htm which will help a lot. I have used it and it tames the highlights well. Also, when I use PSCS and the H/S tool to correct highlights, I open the tool and set the shadow sliders to zero and only work the highlights. Somethimes it makes a world of difference and sometimes not.

Hopes this helps. If you work on it some more, please repost.
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by Mike Wilson on Thu Sep 29, 2005 6:40 pm
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Great portrait and quite animated with the open bill, nice one. I like the heart-shaped spots on the necklace, cool. Robert has made some great suggestions.
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