Goose

Posted by Katy on Sun Jan 09, 2005 2:05 pm

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10D. 200mm2.8lens, f5.6, 1/250sec ISO 100

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by Jim Neely on Sun Jan 09, 2005 2:49 pm

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Nice portrait. I'd like to see a highlight in the eye and a little more DOF.

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by Cindy Marple on Sun Jan 09, 2005 2:56 pm

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I like your composition. Agree with just a bit more DOF.

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by E.J. Peiker on Sun Jan 09, 2005 4:35 pm

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Moving the goose head a bit to the right would help compositionally and the eye is too dead for my taste. this needs flash.

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by Len Maltese on Sun Jan 09, 2005 5:49 pm

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Nice . I think a little fill would of helped.

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by Alan Murphy on Sun Jan 09, 2005 6:04 pm

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A nice headshot katy. My nits have been mentioned.

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by KK Hui on Sun Jan 09, 2005 7:57 pm

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Nice shot, Katy!
Would go along with EJ's suggestions ... :roll:

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by Michael Dossett on Mon Jan 10, 2005 2:21 pm

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Maybe a tad soft in places, I can't decide. Stopping down a little more could solve this or even another round of USM. I wish there was more of a catchlight and more detail visible in that eye though. I think that would really pull me in more. Nice shot otherwise.

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