brown pelican with lunch...


Posted by Darlene Boucher on Wed Jun 09, 2004 8:10 pm

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Canon 1Ds, 1/3200@5.6, ISO 320, focal length 840

Comments and critiques welcome, thanks....

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by Ed K on Wed Jun 09, 2004 9:19 pm
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Darlene - Good catch on the action. A little more room on the left would have been nice to have but it looks like you made the right choice by saving the water trail. Very NiceShot!

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by Mike Wilson on Wed Jun 09, 2004 10:06 pm
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Very cool behavior. Ed makes a good comment about the comp choice. If this is full frame, I might consider cropping the left side and top to get tighter on the head, bill and water trail. A bit more contrast and saturation would give it some pop too. The colors look a bit flat.
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by Cindy Marple on Wed Jun 09, 2004 10:32 pm
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Great catch of a decisive moment. Agree with Mikes suggestions. I like that water trail!
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by Jim Probst on Wed Jun 09, 2004 10:45 pm
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Darlene,

Terrific timing on this very nice capture!
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by brianBush on Thu Jun 10, 2004 12:42 am
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Great stuff Darlene, when we went out on the Gulf I don't think I saw on Pelican catch a fish in all the trips they made out there.
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by DC on Thu Jun 10, 2004 3:11 am
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Very nice, tack sharp. Mike makes some very good suggestions for improving an already excellent image.
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by AlexC on Thu Jun 10, 2004 5:07 am
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The nits have been covered, I like the fish going down the slippery slide!!
Congrats!! 8)
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by Alan Murphy on Thu Jun 10, 2004 10:11 am
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Darlene, great action here. I just miss the tail.
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