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Posted by Dan Barthel on Sun Nov 23, 2003 1:25 pm

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by Michael Brown on Sun Nov 23, 2003 11:19 pm
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The first 3 flowers Dan have a nice balance of light and detail shown, but the 4th flowers distracts the eye because of the washed out look with not much detail as the others. The depth shown is just a bit distracting also with those lines showing in the background, and if that were a tad more OOF then it would help the flowers to standout a bit more and my eyes would not wonder around and stay on the main subject.

You might could play around with a different crop to eliminate the washed out flower, and possibly come up with a pretty interesting composition.

Hope this helps Dan, and please keep on sending them.
Love looking at them all!! 8)

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by E.J. Peiker on Wed Nov 26, 2003 11:48 am
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Very nice subject. I would prefer a mre even background and more diffuse light on the subject.
 

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