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Posted by robert hasty on Wed Oct 22, 2003 5:39 pm

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Image taken last week in the eastern pocono mountain's. Your comments are appreciated!

Thanks much,
robert.........

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[i] There is a path which no fowl knoweth, and which the vulture's eye hath not seen:[/i][/size]

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by Ken Cravillion on Wed Oct 22, 2003 6:06 pm

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I like these environmental shots. I might crop a bit off the left side as it does't add to the image. Maybe the the narrow tree behind the rock.

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by robert hasty on Wed Oct 22, 2003 6:14 pm

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Thanks for the quick reply ken, i do understand! I like the comp as is though because of the flow of the stream thru the frame. The rock bottom left i think helps to anchor the image also and in take sorta echoes the picnic table opposite upper right. That being said, im finding it a tad bit busy myself with little twigs

wish it were a wee bit cleaner. Man, im rough on myself

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by Ken Cravillion on Wed Oct 22, 2003 6:16 pm

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The crop I mean doesn't loose any water. Think cropping little less then half the rock in the LLC.

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by robert hasty on Wed Oct 22, 2003 6:26 pm

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Ah yes, now i see what you meant

i do like that, thanks Ken!!

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by Harvey Edelman on Thu Oct 23, 2003 9:43 am

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This is well done Robert even though I don't see the HOM. A bit of a crop on the left and bottom ( I see it's already been mentioned) might give a bit better balance as this a bit heavy on the left side but I like this. Uncluttered and good technicals.

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by matt kuchta on Thu Oct 23, 2003 12:42 pm

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I'd go with a slight crop off the left too - but I do like the rock in the LLeft.

I was going to ask where's the HOM too, until I saw the tables - I like that they're hidden.
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by Kelly on Thu Oct 23, 2003 9:18 pm

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Robert, very nice, although a bit cluttered as you already know. I think I took one from the right side of this same stream just a bit beyond the picnic table last fall.

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by RichardMittleman/Gon2Foto on Fri Oct 24, 2003 5:31 pm

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I like the composition as is.

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