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Posted by Attila on Sat May 22, 2004 2:55 pm

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Canon 10D ISO100 f22 1/5sec 17-40 @ 32mm Gaussian blur on the grass.
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by TSparger on Sat May 22, 2004 10:34 pm
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Unfortunately, this shot does not do much for me. I'm not sure I can tell what effect the gaussian blur is having on the grass. What is your main subject here?
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by AndrewC on Sat May 22, 2004 11:19 pm
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Give us a clue what you are aiming for in this image ?
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by mhp767 on Sun May 23, 2004 2:19 pm
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I like the composition and the detail in the grasses. I'm not sure what the blur did to the shot, but overall I think it's a pretty strong image.
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by Dan Creighton on Sun May 23, 2004 2:52 pm
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I think the gaussion blur added a nice softness to the grasses but I do wish for more use of line or a stronger visual lead in and anchor.
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by blovius on Mon May 24, 2004 10:17 am
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yo attila,

this is a wonderful photograph.

Like the others, i am uncertain about the gblur on the grass - actually uncertain about seeing the effect at all. i think we would need to se the unblurred original for comparison.

that said, i think that this photograph demonstrate a wonderful use of 2 dimensional space. form, shape, color and texture all conspire to create an engaging visual energy that takes this photograph well beyond the merely decorative.

once my eye gets past the relatively mundane subject and begins to view the "print" as a 2 dimensional object the fun really starts. i see 3 distinct forms of visual energy - the repeating and rhythmic energy of the grasses, the stoic and commanding energy of the tree trunks, and the random and somewhat choatic energy of the bkgnd. delightful

but it is the transitions from one field of visual energy to the next that is pure poetry. the manner in which the tree trunks abruptly interject themselves into the gentle flow of the grasses and then lead the eye into the randomness of the bkgnd is visual treat.

the actual subjects themselves have a very visually harmonious relationship to one another that defines what "compostion" is all about.

very nice.
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by Attila on Tue May 25, 2004 9:20 pm
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Thanks all the comments, it's good to see when a picture gets a wide range of opinions.. for those who requested, here's the picture with no blur overlay:

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