Does it Work ?

Posted by AForns on Thu Sep 29, 2005 2:10 am

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by Steve Metildi on Thu Sep 29, 2005 2:10 am

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Al this is really cool and original. I think it adds to the comp with them at varying degrees of focus.

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by mrhughj on Thu Sep 29, 2005 6:04 am

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The main subject is framed very nicely by the OOF birds, Alfred!!!!!!!!! Works for me.

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by Carol Clarke on Thu Sep 29, 2005 6:56 am

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Yes, it certainly works for me!! Different and excellent!! :)

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by Bruce Sherman on Thu Sep 29, 2005 12:17 pm

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Works for me. Alfred. Very high on the cuteness meter.

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by Mike Wilson on Thu Sep 29, 2005 8:58 pm

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They are tough to get as a group and make it work. For me, I like it but would much prefer them to be more in focus and spaced out if possible in a small group of 4 like this. The low angle works and the light is good. Having the one bird looking at you and in focus makes it work in this case. Nice work Al.

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by alibenn on Fri Sep 30, 2005 5:11 am

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I'm on the fence as well, I think the birds are fine, the framing is nice and the birds arrangement also. No feet is a negative as is all the OOF foreground. If you has some FG sharpness it would anchor better, as is, it's a lot of OOF stuff and 85% of a sharp Semi P. BUT...it tells a damned fine story about what these little guys are all about, so it's a keeper..