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Posted by Rachels on Sun Sep 01, 2019 10:55 pm

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by Cynthia Crawford on Mon Sep 02, 2019 6:58 am
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Ah- I see you are following the Monarch too! Very nice shot- so exciting, isn't it?
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by Rachels on Mon Sep 02, 2019 1:46 pm
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Cynthia Crawford wrote:
Ah- I see you are following the Monarch too! Very nice shot- so exciting, isn't it?



Yes   So exciting!! Looking forward to seeing your video!!
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by Craig Lipski on Mon Sep 02, 2019 4:34 pm
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I love this - please take these as suggestions, not criticisms!
Maybe lift the shadows / blacks a bit  for more detail?
And the top of the crop, cutting off the top of the chrysalis feels to me like scalping a portrait.
I don’t claim any expertise, I’m a hobbyist (is that a real word?). I’d be happy with this, but would probably play endlessly w/ pp options.
Edit: The bg is perfect!
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by Rachels on Tue Sep 03, 2019 12:25 am
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Craig Lipski wrote:
I love this - please take these as suggestions, not criticisms!
Maybe lift the shadows / blacks a bit  for more detail?
And the top of the crop, cutting off the top of the chrysalis feels to me like scalping a portrait.
I don’t claim any expertise, I’m a hobbyist (is that a real word?). I’d be happy with this, but would probably play endlessly w/ pp options.
Edit: The bg is perfect!




thanks for your input Craig
  suggestions are always welcomed
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by Tom Whelan on Tue Sep 03, 2019 9:15 pm
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Fine image, the contrast of the clear chrysalis and the colorful butterfly is striking.
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