Tranquil Stream


Posted by mhp767 on Tue Jun 29, 2004 8:48 pm

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Eos 3, 50? mm, Provia, tripod, circular polarizer
A nice spot to take off your shoes and socks and cool your feet off on a hike. I really struggled with trying to get the colors and saturation right in this one, don't think it's there yet.. All feedback welcome, thanks!
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by robert hasty on Wed Jun 30, 2004 6:33 pm
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Technically very well done Matt. The overall image and or comp isnt working for me. Theres nothing leading me into the image, no starting point or end. It kinda just is if ya know what i mean? Lacking a little flow or visual rhythm per say. My honest 2 pennys and just trying to help!

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by mhp767 on Wed Jun 30, 2004 9:06 pm
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I agree Robert, the composition isn't the strongest. Thanks for the feedback!
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