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Posted by oleg2011 on Thu Oct 08, 2015 1:03 pm

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[font=arial, sans-serif] Canon 700D;Canon EF100f/2,8 1/320s f9 ISO400[/font]

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by Tom Whelan on Thu Oct 08, 2015 8:52 pm

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Nice pose, a fine subject, and a good diagonal plan for the composition.

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by oleg2011 on Thu Oct 08, 2015 11:44 pm

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Tom Whelan wrote:Nice pose, a fine subject, and a good diagonal plan for the composition.

THANKS!

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by stevenmajor on Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:29 am

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For me, more light on the subject would show more detail and make for a better image.

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by oleg2011 on Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:39 am

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stevenmajor wrote:For me, more light on the subject would show more detail and make for a better image.

OK! This was Contre-jour

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by Matthew Pugh on Sat Oct 10, 2015 1:52 am

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Hi

I like the composition and the image execution looks good in terms of techs like sharpness ect, but for me the lighting does not really work. It does not give the appearance of being back lit with a nice rim lit effect; more overhead imo. So personally just a little bit of flash would have help out, nothing fancy. The one built into the camera would have done the job nicely

Still there are more positives to this image than negatives, and the lighting looks a subjective aspect anyone

All the best
Matthew

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