Feather at the beach.


Posted by Campbell on Tue Sep 06, 2005 12:50 am

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I like all the single feather and single leaf photos that I have seen here on NSN. My last trip to La Jolla I was able to make one of my own. It's not smooth & clean like being on glass like water, but I do like the sand stone it is on.
Croped from all sides. I think it might look better bein croped more from the top and less from the bottom?

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by PF on Tue Sep 06, 2005 4:05 am
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This is nice.
As for the crop, I think the top OOF part has no interest so I would remove it.
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by AForns on Tue Sep 06, 2005 12:55 pm
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Great visualization Jason !!!! 8) 8) Would rather have the feather at the left toward the bottom and agree on using the bottom portion only !!!

Just covered the oof top with a board and the image shines !!! Way to go Jason!!! 8) 8)
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by E.J. Peiker on Tue Sep 06, 2005 1:11 pm
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I like this a lot, might try it stopped down a whole bunch though to try to get it all sharp.
 

by RAmoruso on Tue Sep 06, 2005 1:58 pm
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Nice compositional ideas going on here Jason. Think I agree with the others on the re-cropping.
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by Ken Cravillion on Tue Sep 06, 2005 2:23 pm
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The back bright areas are distracting to me. I would crop them out. Otherwise good.
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