Jogger in sepia

Posted by robert hasty on Tue Jul 20, 2004 10:13 pm

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Converted sepia and a small tweak on the curve bar. Thanks for looking!!

robert............

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by Paul Klenck on Tue Jul 20, 2004 10:25 pm

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I like the look of the grasses--almost like low lying fog. I'd prefer the jogger off center. Maybe to the right by the earlier dip in the grasses.

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by Harvey Edelman on Wed Jul 21, 2004 8:14 am

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Nice choice of tones and nice comp. I'd crop just a touch on the left side to position the tree at the powerpoint.

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by robert hasty on Wed Jul 21, 2004 8:51 pm

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While i agree the jogger would look nice to the right, would that help the relation of the tree and jogger or vice versa or take away? Something to think about

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by Paul Klenck on Wed Jul 21, 2004 10:54 pm

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Nice to return to this one. I like it more on further viewing and the relation of runner to tree. IMO, still think would like him to the right a bit.

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by Anders on Thu Jul 22, 2004 9:42 am

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Robert,

Nice shot. I like the mood set by the sepia toning. I've been going back to this image a few times now, and every time I've found myself struggling with the placement of the runner. I would prefer him further to the right. Didn't read the comments until now when I saw that this has been suggested by Paul as well.

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