lavender field - provence - france

Posted by fendleroc on Tue Aug 02, 2005 2:15 am

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by Ken Cravillion on Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:57 pm

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The sky is blown which is a distraction. Cropping improves the image. Also. I see you added some image to the left side.

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by Neil Fitzgerald on Wed Aug 03, 2005 3:51 am

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The cloning on the left is rather obvious. Cropping the sky, as Ken suggested, helps.

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by fendleroc on Wed Aug 03, 2005 6:07 am

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hello,

sorry for the cloning but there was un ugly pine tree in the forground... but the real field was there

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by Guy Edwardes on Wed Aug 03, 2005 8:57 am

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A good subject but the lighting wasn't helping you here - the colours are very washed out and as a result the image lacks impact. When the sky is as featureless as this it is normally best to exclude it from your composition. In softer warmer light with longer shadows and a better sky this layered composition could have been effective.

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