sunrise ...... in jeddah


Posted by Dr. Ders on Tue Sep 06, 2005 5:13 pm

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hello ... whats up? :lol:

here is a picture that i took the other day .. to a sunrise of well i cant say its a dessert but it really looks like one :oops:

some modifications and BINGOOO !!!
actually there was alot of modification ,i had to modify the sky alone then modify the ground :roll:

and the result was this ... a nice sunrise in jeddah - a nice city in saudi arabia -
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hope you enjoy

but i really need your opinions on the down side of the pic .. what do you think was not successful in the photo .. ??

Nikon5400
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but SORRY !! its in arabic

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by jsturtvant on Tue Sep 06, 2005 6:11 pm
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Well I really like the clouds in the background, but the foreground
leaves something to be desired. I think the trash? in the middlegroud
really hurts the picture. Ifyou could have found somthing interesting
to place in the foreground this would be improved. Another tack might
be to eliminate the trash in the foreground and middle ground so that
you have only the empty sand to lead the eye back to the clouds
which is the real focal point of the image
 

by Ken Cravillion on Tue Sep 06, 2005 8:41 pm
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Great sky but the land really doesn't do anything for me either.
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by Campbell on Fri Sep 09, 2005 7:14 am
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I think cropping the majority of the FG out would help this one a lot.
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