Golden light on the rocks


Posted by Andrea Papaleo on Wed Dec 03, 2014 5:16 pm

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Bay of Riaci, sunrise. Golden light on the rocks


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by Chris Kayler on Thu Dec 04, 2014 9:58 am
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Hi Andrea, I guess this one isn't working for me too much. The composition was a nice idea with the straight rock jutting up from the bottom of the frame, but the bit to the right of the center line makes it a bit heavy feeling to me. Additionally, I find that the largest boulders about 2/3rds up the frame on the left and right of the frame are too cramped towards the edge, particularly the left one as it also has the land mass behind it. I think the vignetted look of the sky is also a bit harsh considering how bright the light is on the rocks in the middle of the frame.
 

by John Labrenz on Sat Dec 06, 2014 2:41 am
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Nice colors and overall a good thought regarding the composition.
A good critique from Chris.
 

by Jens Peermann on Sun Dec 07, 2014 12:18 am
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Nice arrangement of the elements. It makes the viewer curious about what may be behind the horizon.
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