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Just a glimpse of yellow


Posted by dandc on Mon May 06, 2019 9:50 am

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Sony RX10 IV - 1/250, f/4, 200 ISO, 24mm equivalent
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by Tom Whelan on Mon May 06, 2019 7:50 pm
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I like the cropped view of the camellia and the dynamic composition. I think it would be better balanced if the yellow areas weren't as bright.
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by Carol Clarke on Thu May 09, 2019 4:09 am
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I agree with Tom on this one. What a lovely camelia.

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by Matthew Pugh on Mon May 13, 2019 11:12 am
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Hi

I kind of like the playing about with light, and although I like the bloom - I think the image would be stronger without it. Just concentrating upon the foliage and lighting play upon the right would have been nice lol

But as it stands - although it is indeed a nicely executed shot I think the image itself is in two minds about its own desires


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