Lupin, Lake McCumber, Northern California

Posted by miker on Wed Jun 27, 2018 2:55 pm

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a6000 PZ16-50mm 26mm f8 1/40th ISO 100

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by Ed Cordes on Wed Jun 27, 2018 3:23 pm

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Nice dreamy lighting. I might consider a crop which eliminated the round flare on top.

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by Tom Whelan on Wed Jun 27, 2018 8:25 pm

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The light is lovely, so are the lupine blooms. I see several images you could extract from this scene - one is vertical of the central bloom with a longer focal length lens.

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by Matthew Pugh on Tue Jul 03, 2018 10:16 am

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Hi

I like the essence of your idea but feel the composition does not really stand up to inspection. I think the image needed to be distilled down to show off what attracted you to the scene while also having a focal point to draw the eye. But having said this I would encourage you to explore these more, its the exploration that's fun; and will also evolve your own style/look

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