Cottonwood Tree (Repost)


Posted by Dan Baumbach on Thu Oct 16, 2003 6:36 pm

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150 or 300mm lens (I can't remember)
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by Maxis Gamez on Thu Oct 16, 2003 6:41 pm
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I like the composition, however it looks a little flat to me. It needs a little life :roll:
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by Ken Cravillion on Thu Oct 16, 2003 11:49 pm
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I agree with Maxis. This needs something more. Too cool toned I think?
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by Anders on Fri Oct 17, 2003 9:25 am
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Nice, but isn't there a pronounced blue cast here?


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by John Zinn on Fri Oct 17, 2003 9:38 am
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Nice shot Dan, but I am a little confused - Where are the waves!?! I hope you had fun shooting with Guy. I agree with the others this is a little too cool making the rock magenta instead of red/orange. I would use the dead trunk as neutral reference point for color adjustments. Warming this up will add punch to the tree also.
 

by Dan Baumbach on Fri Oct 17, 2003 10:57 am
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This better?

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by Ken Cravillion on Fri Oct 17, 2003 11:11 am
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The tones are much better Dan. Thought the image isn't one of your strongest.
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