Seeking a title for this image....


Posted by ugolino on Fri Sep 22, 2017 9:36 am

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Not sure this is the right forum....
Very minimal digital manipulation, one image reversed, then collaged opposite the other image, and a slight crop...
I have been dreaming of this composition for a few months, since I took the same owl in nearly the same position with eyes opened and eyes closed.
Now, with the help of a friend, I have it, but cannot settle on a title...
Ideas welcome....
Thank you for looking and thinking, ugolino
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by Ron Day on Fri Sep 22, 2017 1:08 pm
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Very cool idea which has been well executed. A possible title: "In the Blink of an Eye."
 

by Cynthia Crawford on Fri Sep 22, 2017 1:59 pm
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Love Ron's title! This is very clever- like it a lot, and yes, you're in the right forum for sure! This looks a LOT better when you click on the larger image! I think it is wonderful you got these two almost identical poses with the eyes open and shut. If they were closer together I'd say "How about a kiss, Sweetie?" The one on the right is perhaps feeling a little shy... ;)
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by andre paul on Fri Sep 22, 2017 5:10 pm
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original image there....
i like the concept.

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by Sandy R-B on Mon Sep 25, 2017 8:32 am
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Beautiful owls, and nice processing.
There is a program in Photoshop where you could remove part of the black between them, to bring them closer together, and then allow more black on either side. I believe that would balance the image a lot more, and greatly improve it.
Very nice as posted!
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by SantaFeJoe on Tue Sep 26, 2017 1:52 pm
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Reminds me of just about every time I try to shoot a group shot! Someone always closes their eyes at the moment I click the shutter. I agree about bringing them a bit closer together.

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by Sandy R-B on Tue Sep 26, 2017 3:28 pm
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How about "Taking Turns" (napping and watching.)?
or Ying and Yang
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by ugolino on Wed Sep 27, 2017 7:11 am
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Thank you all for watching, commenting and suggesting...
A friend of mine came up with "Guard (or Night) : On and Off"....
Still mulling it over in my head
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