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Posted by David J. Bogener on Thu Nov 19, 2020 2:37 pm

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Lower Klamath NWR, Ca
7D2, Sigma 150-600mmC@600mm, F8, 1/800, ISO 800, bean bag.  I am looking for feedback on this comp.  Thanks for any comments or suggestions, Dave

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by WDCarrier on Thu Nov 19, 2020 3:49 pm
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David,
I'd recommend selecting the over-exposed parts on the right side of the face and use the brightness tool to slightly reduce the selected parts to bring out more detail in the hair on that side of the face.
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by Carol Clarke on Thu Nov 19, 2020 4:14 pm
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My first thought was for a more square presentation - like your thumbnail, but I like it as presented with the area above the head giving a nice sense of depth as we can see through the fern like plants and further behind, especially when clicked on for the uncompressed view. This gives the impression that the coyote has stealthily crept forward through the undergrowth to take a peep at you. Nicely done, Dave!

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by Cynthia Crawford on Fri Nov 20, 2020 6:23 am
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This is unique- love the idea that the coyote is having a stealthy look, perhaps at you! A tricky shot in the very bright light-you did pretty well with it.
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by Mary Brun on Sat Nov 21, 2020 11:57 am
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Beautiful shot, very well composed with a particular attitude.
I like the effect of the ferns in the background and the blur in the foreground.
All this divides the composition into three plans.
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by Lerkes on Sun Nov 29, 2020 8:09 am
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I think the square crop would work better but as is is nice, too.

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