Early morning in Florida (II)

Posted by ugolino on Sat Jan 14, 2017 1:10 pm

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The sun was just hitting the corners of its eyes and there wasn't a ripple in the water.
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PS: edited with advice. Is it better ?

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by Cindy Marple on Sat Jan 14, 2017 3:09 pm

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I like the perspective, you took advantage of that nice still water. Such a menacing look!
From a processing standpoint, I'd try a version of this somewhat brighter, to me the water is a bit dark. I'd also crop a bit off the top, putting the subject a bit higher in the overall frame. Just some thoughts to try.

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by Ron Day on Sat Jan 14, 2017 9:34 pm

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I really like the first light on the eyes and the smooth water. Cindy's suggestions have merit and would be worthwhile.

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by Robert Sabin on Sun Jan 15, 2017 11:46 pm

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Cindy Marple wrote:I like the perspective, you took advantage of that nice still water. Such a menacing look!
From a processing standpoint, I'd try a version of this somewhat brighter, to me the water is a bit dark. I'd also crop a bit off the top, putting the subject a bit higher in the overall frame. Just some thoughts to try.

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