Red Curves


Posted by Inspiredbynature on Tue Mar 17, 2015 1:16 am

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A storm brews over Whitepocket Arizona.

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by E.J. Peiker on Wed Mar 18, 2015 11:36 am
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This is a cool area with a lot of potential. Your photograph, to my eyes could be improved by cropping a bit off the bottom as it feels just a bit bottom heavy due to not that much texture as you get to the bottom of the frame.

The whole photo feels a little truncated on the left to me as I'd like to see just a hair more of the storm and you could give up a slither on the right as the dark little peak going off of the right edge of the frame is a bit of a distraction.
 

by MalcolmBenn on Wed Mar 18, 2015 7:11 pm
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What I particularly like about this image is that the red curves in the foreground rocks are picked up by the blue curve in the falling rain in the distance.
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by John Labrenz on Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:32 pm
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Nice lines and colors...I too vote for a crop off the bottom.
 

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