Antelope #4 BW


Posted by Dan Barthel on Tue Dec 02, 2014 10:35 pm

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Continuing exploring Upper Antelope Canyon in black and white. Canon 5D 16-35@16 f8
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by Dean Hebert on Thu Dec 04, 2014 3:01 am
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For a slot canyon, this has almost an open feel to it. I would consider toning down the bright area near the top middle as it draws my eye up and out. This might be my favourite of the series so far.
 

by James W. Milligan on Thu Dec 04, 2014 10:34 am
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The range of tones in the image works well for B&W.I do like the amount of detail in the image. This is most definitely my number one pick in your fine series of images.
 

by Chris Kayler on Thu Dec 04, 2014 10:45 am
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Hi Dan! This is another nice one in the series. Love the spacious feeling portrayed here! My suggestion for this one would be to crop off the bottom about a 1/4'' to just above the black "cutoff" line on the bottom left.
 

by Dan Barthel on Thu Dec 04, 2014 9:31 pm
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Chris Kayler wrote:Hi Dan! This is another nice one in the series. Love the spacious feeling portrayed here! My suggestion for this one would be to crop off the bottom about a 1/4'' to just above the black "cutoff" line on the bottom left.
Then the curve on the right bottom is incomplete. 
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by John Labrenz on Sat Dec 06, 2014 2:38 am
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Agree completely with Dean's thoughts.
One of your best in this series.
 

by Peter McCabe on Sat Dec 06, 2014 2:46 pm
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Nicely crafted image and what amazing lines and shapes.
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by E.J. Peiker on Mon Dec 08, 2014 11:46 am
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Well done. Very nice tonal range in this one.
 

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