Trio

An interesting combination of monochromatic images Vasanthi --- I like the positioning of the petals.

I find the outer thick black border too heavy for the delicate colour tone here, the inner single black line is fine and for me would work better as a border on its own.  The triple study of form and lines works very well but is overpowered as shown.  Just my personal tastes again! 

Carol Clarke wrote:I find the outer thick black border too heavy for the delicate colour tone here, the inner single black line is fine and for me would work better as a border on its own.  The triple study of form and lines works very well but is overpowered as shown.  Just my personal tastes again! 

Carol I have removed the border and replaced the original.

That makes so much difference! The trio stand on their own merit now instead of being pushed to the background, they have their freedom!

Vasanthi, Thanks for the extra effort. By the way, when posting a second version, please simply insert it in a reply so that the original is still available for comparison.

Gary Briney wrote:Vasanthi, Thanks for the extra effort. By the way, when posting a second version, please simply insert it in a reply so that the original is still available for comparison.

I am not sure what version I am looking at, so I would concur with Gary- would be nice to see a comparison. That said, I like the three shapes-they form a complementary pattern.  I wonder how a softer-colored border would look? I appreciate your adventurous spirit doing these things- it is what this gallery is really about. (Quite a few people are "stepping out" with new ideas these days- nice to see!)

Cindy - The version you're looking at is the second version with narrow boundary lines. - Gary

Gary Briney wrote:Vasanthi, Thanks for the extra effort. By the way, when posting a second version, please simply insert it in a reply so that the original is still available for comparison.

Sorry about that. 
I cropped out the border and the signature panel.  No other adjustments were made. 
I will post the original.

Cynthia Crawford wrote:

Gary Briney wrote:Vasanthi, Thanks for the extra effort. By the way, when posting a second version, please simply insert it in a reply so that the original is still available for comparison.

I am not sure what version I am looking at, so I would concur with Gary- would be nice to see a comparison. That said, I like the three shapes-they form a complementary pattern.  I wonder how a softer-colored border would look? I appreciate your adventurous spirit doing these things- it is what this gallery is really about. (Quite a few people are "stepping out" with new ideas these days- nice to see!)

Cindy here is the original:

Vasanthi Balson wrote:

Cynthia Crawford wrote:

Gary Briney wrote:Vasanthi, Thanks for the extra effort. By the way, when posting a second version, please simply insert it in a reply so that the original is still available for comparison.

I am not sure what version I am looking at, so I would concur with Gary- would be nice to see a comparison. That said, I like the three shapes-they form a complementary pattern.  I wonder how a softer-colored border would look? I appreciate your adventurous spirit doing these things- it is what this gallery is really about. (Quite a few people are "stepping out" with new ideas these days- nice to see!)

Cindy here is the original:

Thanks for posting this!  I like it!  It has a sort of stained glass effect.  Both are very nice , but I think I have a slight preference for this one.